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 I commented on Sarah’s Reading Reflection
http://slane.uniblogs.org/2007/03/20/deadline-8-32407-hw1-reading-reflection/#comment-96   I commented on Michelle’s Reading Reflection
http://cook.uniblogs.org/2007/03/24/32407-deadline-9-hw-1-reading-reflection/#comment-57
   I commented on Michelle’s WP Reflection
http://cook.uniblogs.org/2007/03/24/32407-deadline-9-hw-4-writing-project-reflection/#comment-58
     I commented on Jeremy’s Reading Reflection
http://jerddd.uniblogs.org/2007/03/23/deadline-9-32407-hw-1-reading-reflection/#comment-40
I commented on Jeremy’s WP Reflection
http://jerddd.uniblogs.org/2007/03/24/deadline-9-32407-hw-4-writing-project-reflection/#comment-41
   This week’s deadline was interesting I found Chapter #7 very helpful and am excited to apply what I have learned to my project. It almost makes me feel a little […]

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 Distinguishing Between Reporting and Arguing
For school I have written a couple of research papers for science classes. I feel the purpose of these was to collect data a rewrite what I have learned with no other definitive purpose in mind. Its goal was to prove that I did the necessary research to prove my competency […]

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 Finding the sources I planned on using for this project was my first step. After compiling all of my sources I started to organize them and find out in there was anything I was missing or if they may not work based upon the assignments right away I realized I did not have enough sources […]

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 Annotated Bibliography
Brian Doyle
ENG102
SEC. 4628
WP#2 Draft
Introduction
While collecting these sources I have found several different health affects of high fructose corn syrup I will concentrate on. Researchers have done studies connecting HFCS consumption to excessive weight gain and other health issues including diabetes. The main controversy of this product is its blamed for is obesity. Many argue […]

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  In this week reading reflection I found the term reporting interesting. I have never thought about it up until this point and feel that my project is mostly reporting because until recently I had not developed and strong position on my topic. I also found what is your rhetorical situation helpful in establishing my exact […]

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 I commented on Sarah’s Grammer Assignment
http://slane.uniblogs.org/2007/03/10/deadline-8-31007-hw3-grammar-assignment/#comment-94 I commented on Sarah’s Grammer Assignment
http://slane.uniblogs.org/2007/03/10/deadline-8-31007-hw3-grammar-assignment/#comment-94
I commented on Sarah’s reading reflection
http://slane.uniblogs.org/2007/03/10/deadline-8-31007-hw2-peer-review-reflection/#comment-95
   In this deadline I found it interesting on how I noticed I tend to start my sentences with a lot of the same openings. I actually found it challenging to make these changes. I feel that the majority of this […]

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 This source came from the Wise Traditions in Food, Farming, and The Healing Arts, it is a quarterly magazine published by Weston A. Price Foundation. Linda Forristal CCP, MTA is a former Board Member of Weston A. Price Foundation. The Weston A. Price Foundation is a non-profit charity to support the on going research of […]

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I always find it hard reviewing others work especially in the draft process. It makes it even more difficult when we are reading it in a blog format since you know the formatting has changed. It is interesting how each individual leaves out certain task(s) especially in a draft. We do not seem too much […]

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I commented on Michelle’s WP#2
http://cook.uniblogs.org/2007/03/02/332007-deadline-7-hw-3-wp-2/#comment-46
 
I commented on Jermey’s WP#2
http://jerddd.uniblogs.org/2007/03/04/deadline-7-3307-word-project-2-annotated-bibliographies/#comment-34
 

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I commented on Sarah’s Reading Reflection
http://slane.uniblogs.org/2007/02/28/deadline7-3307-hw1-reading-reflection/#comment-87
 
 
I commented on Sarah’s Designing Effective Documents, Appling Ch.11
http://slane.uniblogs.org/2007/03/03/deadline-7-3307-hw3-apply-chap-11/#comment-88
 
 
I commented of Michelle’s WP#2
http://cook.uniblogs.org/2007/03/02/332007-deadline-7-hw-3-wp-2/#comment-44
 
I comment on Mandolyn’s Chapter 11
http://www.xanga.com/madolyn8/574414713/3-3-07-how-chapter-11-will-help-my-rough-draft.html?nextdate=last
 
I comment on Mandolyn’s Chapter 11
http://www.xanga.com/madolyn8/574435460/3307-deadline-reflection.html?nextdate=last
 
In this lesson I learned some great new tip for my WP#2 &WP#3. For wp number two I based on chapter 11 I went back and made sure […]

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