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 I commented on Sarah’s Grammer Assignment

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I commented on Sarah’s reading reflection

http://slane.uniblogs.org/2007/03/10/deadline-8-31007-hw2-peer-review-reflection/#comment-95

   In this deadline I found it interesting on how I noticed I tend to start my sentences with a lot of the same openings. I actually found it challenging to make these changes. I feel that the majority of this information will be helpful for all future projects. It seems most of us struggle with the some of the same things, yet some are much better then others in certain areas the peer reviews are always useful to provide insight about information we may miss or are not practicing. While making revisions to my sentences in the grammar exercise I noticed some other changes in my work that need to be done on the paragraph in general. I was able to apply this to other paragraphs as I revised each source.

In this deadline I found it interesting on how I noticed I tend to start my sentences with a lot of the same openings. I actually found it challenging to make these changes. I feel that the majority of this information will be helpful for all future projects. It seems most of us struggle with the some of the same things, yet some are much better then others in certain areas the peer reviews are always useful to provide insight about information we may miss or are not practicing. While making revisions to my sentences in the grammar exercise I noticed some other changes in my work that need to be done on the paragraph in general. I was able to apply this to other paragraphs as I revised each source.

I commented on Sarah’s reading reflection

http://slane.uniblogs.org/2007/03/10/deadline-8-31007-hw2-peer-review-reflection/#comment-95

I commented on Michelle’s Grammer Assignment

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 I commented on Michelle’s Grammer Assignment

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